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All you guys complaining about blasphemy go suck an egg. This is NG, the one place in the world that is jam packed with violence, sex, drugs, racism, and other sinful crap. Give the guy a break. How you could improve: Just add stuff. Make sure you keep everybody on the same level. Mock the atheist just as much as god, and buddha so you dont seriously offend anyone. Make more scenes before he gets to god. Good surprise ending. I gave you a 5.